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'Music (PT2)' (New 2012)
Wrote this one last night after listening to my original one and realizing I wanted to do another one with a slightly different approach...Once again, recorded with my phone
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The Grim Reefer
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I'm liking it but it sounds kinda rushed when you're spitting. Establish your flow and synchronize it with the beat and remember it's all about repetition.
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In all seriousness. You need to work on your flow. I agree with grim completely.
Also it seems like you just throw words randomly in there. |
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Dope ****
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