[Relapse]

Wrote this one last night after listening to my original one and realizing I wanted to do another one with a slightly different approach...Once again, recorded with my phone



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[INTRO]
*Laugh*...Its funny...
Really what do you see when you're lookin' at me? / "The white kid behind the mic, trying to act black, thinkin' he belongs in rap"? / *****, I do! / I just want you to visualize life through MY eyes / and realize I put everything I have into this! / and if you mistook me as a fake wannabe / who just one day decided to pick up a pen 'n pad / and lay down what he had / then you're sadly mistaking / call me Paul Walker, this game is MINE FOR THE TAKING!

[VERSE1]
ITS FUNNY, you think my life is great / **** I cover up the tears / I run through every single day fighting my own demons and struggling to stay sane. / All while trying to prove I'm not making music just so people know my name / or to try and gain 15 minutes of fame! / I do this cause I love it / Truth is, the only thing that keeps me level headed is writing music. / This is my 2nd song for you to just accept me for who I am / I'm not asking to be handed anything / I UNDERSTAND! / Respect is earned, and I expected that / never once wanted or asked for a free pass / but as I continue to persevere and conquer / just remember when you're running back kissing my ass / that I TOLD YOU SO! / I'm not being cocky, I JUST KNOW! / I got something to prove, and I'm just telling you the truth! / I've been doubted my whole life, its nothing new / But its my time now / and I'm not playin' around! / I'll be damned if I'm just gonna let this pass me by / I'ma put every bit of energy I have left in me / doubt me all you want, THIS IS DESTINY!

[VERSE2/Outro]
My life seems like a gift and a curse / but through all adversity I promise to remain the same / I'm not in it to be another commercial Illuminati puppet / if that means I'll never sell a mil, then **** it! / that's fine by me, I don't need a deal / I'm just being honest, this ain't pretend, I promise! / This is the true documentary of my road to glory and proving you all wrong / that I DO BELONG in rap / now how does that taste being spit back in your face?! / Swallowing your own words, cause now you realize that I CAN do it / This is like a fact, I don't gotta say nothing else, I JUST PROVED IT!....

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**A modified version of Eminem's - 'Til I Collapse' Instrumental was used. I do not own the copyright**

[Grim]

I'm liking it but it sounds kinda rushed when you're spitting. Establish your flow and synchronize it with the beat and remember it's all about repetition.

[James]

In all seriousness. You need to work on your flow. I agree with grim completely.

Also it seems like you just throw words randomly in there.

[Based G]

Dope ****

[Relapse]

Originally Posted by Grim

I'm liking it but it sounds kinda rushed when you're spitting. Establish your flow and synchronize it with the beat and remember it's all about repetition.

Appreciate the feedback. I agree.

Originally Posted by Twilks

In all seriousness. You need to work on your flow. I agree with grim completely.

Also it seems like you just throw words randomly in there.

Thanks for the opinion. As for random words, kinda a small part of rap lol

Originally Posted by Infinity

Dope ****

Thank you